What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? I think the Kc3 piece showcases your ability to use a range of ideas. This piece was packed with ideas. The Roots and Recipe piece, however, showcased your personal voice. That writing had a stronger personal connection to your topic.
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? Strengths: The presentation/appearance of your portfolio is aesthetically pleasing. It's also easy to navigate. Growth Area: I would like you to work on revising your introductory sections and pay attention to conventions. Because it's the first section your reader sees it's important that the errors not detract from you message.
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? Ideas and Voice are most evident in the pieces of writing you selected. Those are essential traits to have in every piece. You presented two different pieces that have two different voices: academic and personal.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? I think that if you work on Sentence Fluency (using a range of sentences) your Kc3 piece may hold your reader's attention longer. Sometimes, when there are a lot of ideas to synthesize, the reading because "dizzy" when the patterns is the same. Of course conventions is a boring trait to work on, but it's essential to be proficient in because too many errors detract from your message. Proofread please!
What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
ReplyDeleteI think the Kc3 piece showcases your ability to use a range of ideas. This piece was packed with ideas.
The Roots and Recipe piece, however, showcased your personal voice. That writing had a stronger personal connection to your topic.
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
Strengths: The presentation/appearance of your portfolio is aesthetically pleasing. It's also easy to navigate.
Growth Area: I would like you to work on revising your introductory sections and pay attention to conventions. Because it's the first section your reader sees it's important that the errors not detract from you message.
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
Ideas and Voice are most evident in the pieces of writing you selected. Those are essential traits to have in every piece. You presented two different pieces that have two different voices: academic and personal.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? I think that if you work on Sentence Fluency (using a range of sentences) your Kc3 piece may hold your reader's attention longer. Sometimes, when there are a lot of ideas to synthesize, the reading because "dizzy" when the patterns is the same. Of course conventions is a boring trait to work on, but it's essential to be proficient in because too many errors detract from your message. Proofread please!